RFC Errata
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Status: Held for Document Update (2)
RFC 5583, "Signaling Media Decoding Dependency in the Session Description Protocol (SDP)", July 2009
Source of RFC: mmusic (rai)
Errata ID: 1828
Status: Held for Document Update
Type: Editorial
Publication Format(s) : TEXT
Reported By: Alfred Hoenes
Date Reported: 2009-08-11
Held for Document Update by: Robert Sparks
Section 5.2.2, pg.10 says:
[[ last paragraph of Section 5.2.2: ]] v | Further, dependency types MUST be defined in a Standards-Track document.
It should say:
| Further dependency types MUST be defined in a Standards-Track document.
Notes:
Rationale:
In this case, "Further" is an attribute; the spurious comma
separates this attribute from its noun "[dependency] types",
and thus changes the sense of the sentence in an inappropriate
manner.
Errata ID: 1829
Status: Held for Document Update
Type: Editorial
Publication Format(s) : TEXT
Reported By: Alfred Hoenes
Date Reported: 2009-08-11
Held for Document Update by: Robert Sparks
Section 6.3, pg.12 says:
The signaling mechanisms defined in this document MUST NOT be used to | negotiate between using the attribute-value pair (AVP) [RFC3551] and ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ SAVP [RFC3711] profile for RTP. However, both profiles MAY be used separately or jointly with the signaling mechanism defined in this document.
It should say:
The signaling mechanisms defined in this document MUST NOT be used to | negotiate between using the Audio/Video Profile (AVP) [RFC3551] and | Secure Audio/Video Profile (SAVP) [RFC3711] for RTP. However, both profiles MAY be used separately or jointly with the signaling mechanism defined in this document.
Notes:
Rationale:
Nonsensical acronym expansion (introduced late in the process).
The correct expansion could have been found by inspection of
the References in Section 10.1, in the entry for [RFC3551] !
Only changing the bad expansion turns the sentence weird;
therefore, the above change proposal tries to balance the
language by also expanding "SAVP" and saving the trailing
instance of "profile" (being part of both acronym expansions).